my daughter’s mouth
is remarkable.
smooth and supple, it shapes itself
into an o and grows to an ah –
anticipates a plastic ring.
the tender mollusk tongue
neatly folds and unfolds
around the object
blind in sensation;
the method of
touch slow and exact.
she traces glistening lines
until a soft wetness coats
anything more to be learned
and the tongue retreats,
slips back behind her shell
silent in its knowing.
What a fun little snail. Fantastic word choice in this line, "the tender mollusk tongue".
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Your blog is amazing!! :)) You are a great writer who obviously has a passion for what they are writing about! I would appreciate it if you would check out my blog and let me know what you think in a comment on a post you like! I would love to have a talented writers input! Keep up the great work!!!
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Love that little mollusk mouth! Nice surprise this poem, Erin.
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